Thursday, April 02, 2009

lucky foxes

When the sun shines through and raindrops fall,
foxes get wedded, stands this story tall.
AREN'T THESE DARN FOXES LUCKIER THAN I!
Foxes get wedded, stands this story tall,
when the sun shines through and raindrops fall.

* this is the naisaku form of poetry - too little rules, too much fun.
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5 comments:

Wendy Naisa said...

Hiya, Love the way you wrote this!

Thank you so much for taking the NaisaiKu Challenge? You really have gone to town on this!!

Wonderful!

LadyGarfield said...

oh Wendy, i am so glad you like it. i had good fun writing it too. thanks.

Amias said...

You have made my day, indeed my weekend. You are saying so much, but allowing my imagination to take hold. That and the good humor.

Maggie said...

Sounds like the "pot of gold" was discovered in a different way at the end of the raindrops where the rainbow forms.

Enjoyable read.

LadyGarfield said...

Amias, Maggie, thankyou so much for your kind words. i am glad you enjoyed this.