Thursday, April 02, 2009

making a clay-pot

clay and water and a good strong stir
rat-a-tat rat-a-tat whirrr whirrr whirrr
SO MANY MELODIES MAKE A CLAYPOT
rat-a-tat rat-a-tat whirrr whirrr whirrr
clay and water and a good strong stir


* this is the naisaku form of poetry - too little rules, too much fun.
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4 comments:

SweetTalkingGuy.. said...

Yeah, love it, I've read all your posts through and commented on a couple. I'm going to link your home page to the Mister Linky Thingy over at The NaisaiKu Challenge? So everybody else can click through easily and read your work too.

It would also help us if you could put a clickable link back to The NaisaiKu Challenge? on your posts if possible. Thanks!

LadyGarfield said...

Thankyou very much, SweetTalkingGuy! Appreciate you visit and your kind comments and suggestions.

Maggie said...

I wonder is this clay skin I live in was produced in such a way...love it!

LadyGarfield said...

lols. Maggie, you are one beautiful woman with beautiful words, as is evident from your writings. thankyou for visiting.