Sunday, April 05, 2009

the "me" mentality

'I' for the identity, 'I' for being selfish
that 'I'-rules-the-world is only a cliche
REPLACE 'I' WITH A 'V' AND WHAT A DIFFERENCE YOU WILL SEE!
for 'I'-rules-the-world is only a cliche
let 'I' be for identity, never 'I' for being selfish.


* Totally Optional Prompt: to meditate on a letter, any letter and write about it.

* this is the naisaku form of poetry - too little rules, too much fun.
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8 comments:

Linda Jacobs said...

Yes, This is perfect! I like how you stress the I of identity

I'm going to put your link in the Mr. Linky so more people will see it.

Thanks for participating!

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Yeah Cool!

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

Very nice!

IT’S NOT FUNNY . . . OR IS IT?

Tumblewords: said...

This is very nice! I like the contrast of the I and the not I...

anthonynorth said...

That 'I' gets the world into so much trouble.

LadyGarfield said...

Thankyou Linda, for putting up the Linky thingy for me. I am so glad you liked the poem. Thanks.

SweetTalkingGuy, Sue@Tumblewords, I cannot thankyou enough for you lovely comments each time. Do keep coming... please :)

Linda(@Nickers and Ink), Anthony, glad to have you over. and thanks for liking the poem.

gautami tripathy said...

I todays world, the I is on tops. People only tend to think of themselves. I like this!

BTT: Juggling books

Crafty Green Poet said...

very clever