Saturday, April 04, 2009

patched-up heart

The glued-up pieces of my broken heart,
I put 'em together part by part.
THE PATCHWORK NOW LOOKS LIKE MODERN ART
I put 'em together part by part,
these glued-up pieces of my broken heart.

* this is the naisaku form of poetry - too little rules, too much fun.
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3 comments:

Amias said...

I have read a lot of attempts at this particular poetic style, but this one reads well. That and the fact that I love patchwork quilts.

Maggie said...

I have never tried this form of poetry but it does look interesting and fun to do...I will try it myself in the near future.

This patchwork was really something to see.

LadyGarfield said...

Amias, Maggie, thanks for enjoying this. though you make me wonder - what's with women and their love for patchwork ;)