Thursday, April 02, 2009

two lonely people

You produce a solitaire, you go down on a knee,
it's an impending nightmare, don't you see
OUR RESPECTIVE LONELINESS IS GETTING TO US!
But it's an impending nightmare, don't you see,
when you produce a solitaire and go down on a knee?


* this is the naisaku form of poetry - too little rules, too much fun.
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* Totally Optional Prompt: solitaire


7 comments:

SweetTalkingGuy.. said...

Hi LadyGarfield, clever jiggling of the lines here!

You should post this to Totally Optional Prompts site this week as their prompt is 'Solitaire'

gautami tripathy said...

You sure do!

If Only Pigs Could Fly

Linda Jacobs said...

One of the better naisaiku I've read! Each side of the title feels fresh!

LadyGarfield said...

SweetTalkingGuy, thankyou for you comments.

Gautami, welcome here! thanks for your comment.

Linda, thankyou so much! that was very kind of you.

Amias said...

Oh I so love this and the implications ... my imagination, that is.

Maggie said...

This was a delight to read and made me smile.

LadyGarfield said...

Amias, Maggie, thank-you ladies! I am so glad you had a good time with this.