Thursday, April 02, 2009

you belong to the sky, to earth belong i

How can i tell from afar
that you are the brightest star?
YOU BELONG TO THE SKY, TO EARTH BELONG I
That you are the brightest star,
how can i tell from afar?


* this is the naisaku form of poetry - too little rules, too much fun.
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2 comments:

SweetTalkingGuy.. said...

Love the title here:
YOU BELONG TO THE SKY, TO EARTH BELONG I
It also looks good on the page and is instantly recognisable as a NaisaiKu. And I marvel at the way you pose the question differently between the bottom and the top.

Well done!

LadyGarfield said...

SweetTalkingGuy, i cannot thank you enough for your patience to read my naisaiku and for your kind comments.