Sunday, February 07, 2010

getting priorities right

in a single file
black ants march uphill to eat
it's their breakfast time

* Haiku: A Japanese poem composed of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables. 
* One Single Impression prompt: single


mia said...


gautami tripathy said...

I like!


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Sweetest in the Gale said...

I loved the visual imagery this evoked. Wonderful!

Loch Rob said...

Ants moving up the hill. Small, but formitable in numbers.

Tammie Lee said...

I can see them.
Ants are so fun to watch.

SandyCarlson said...

A formidable image, to be sure.

Pearl said...

clear image. gentle spirit of compassion in the words somehow.

"each keeps single file"?
in single file makes sense but the "a" throws me.

Tumblewords: said...

Always good to remember when it's breakfast time! Very visual!

ladygarfield said...

Thankyou all.
Pearl, you got me thinking. The amends are on the way. Thanks again.

SOL said...

Nice image!

The Amateur Poet said...

lol.. what a different take for single! lovely! :)