Delightful twist and hint of irony in this otherwise romantic poem! Lovely!
I too like that twist!cryptic messagesAlso don't forget to post your creative works at Monday Poetry Train Revisitedon Monday mornings!
I like the twist too--works perfectly.
I love the shift in the end!
Breath taking! Your poet was thinking very deep over a very much liked person to forget breathing!..Did you ever stop breathing for no obvious reason? It's scary!..
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