Monday, February 01, 2010

uncanny

with uncanny strength
he pulls his coffin lid shut
feels deathly relief

* for HaikuBones prompt: uncanny
* Haiku: A Japanese poem composed of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables.

6 comments:

Robin said...

Definitely uncanny! Different and well done.

madeline d. murray said...

I like it. It made me laugh. Great take on the prompt. Thank you.

one more believer said...

that was the best...

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Oh, nice and creepy. Made me laugh. Great take on the prompt.


Melanie

fourwindshaiga said...

Finally a little peace and quiet.

ladygarfield said...

Thanks Robin, Madeline, @one more believer, Melanie, Sandy@FourWindsHaiga