Sunday, June 06, 2010

quietly flows

warm tears on cold cheeks
flow quietly in their wake
a stray sob betrays

* for HaikuBones prompt: quietly
* Haiku/senyru: a Japanese form of poem composed of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables each.

3 comments:

Greyscale Territory said...

In just a few words, the poem reflects deep, wretched inner pain! A beautiful piece!

John's comments said...

Sigh! I went for the Tanka format again My Poem

gautami tripathy said...

Poignant..


incomplete yet so replete